A week or so ago, keeping myself off-balance with a 2b pencil. Now that I look at it from a distance, I'd have paid a little more attention to the heavy-handed shadowing on the hair. The even band of dark is not doing the composition any favors. And while I'm whining, some of my preliminary search lines give the suggestion that his neck is pretty thick. My son'll look at this when he's older and wonder what kind of bruiser he was. If his hair thins out like his old man, he'll weep at his helmet of hair. I'm happy enough with the rest of it though.